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don’t you know how lucky you are?

sitting pretty in the corner of my imagination
rose-hued lips, milk and honey complexion;
my, such long hair you have— are those curls natural?
do your glasses slip down your perfect button nose?
and those eyelashes brush the glass when you blink?
oh, right— you don’t need glasses, your vision is perfect.

my, such clear skin you have— porcelain, like a doll's
and oh, i could write a symphony about your eyes
and how they sparkle— they must be cut from stars.

my, how thin you are— i heard nothing tastes like skinny feels.
i wonder how it feels to be so light.

what? you say you don’t feel light? that you feel heavy, like something is weighing you down?
chip up, darling. you wear an invisible crown—
and if you let it tip, then your world will fall down.
sad? don’t be. you’re pretty.

what? you say that darkness is making your chest cave in?
smile, smile. pretend
no one will know. you’re pretty, you’re pretty,
carve it into your skin
if it makes you feel better.

be a magpie and eat up their sorrows and jealousy,
get sick on the obsequious words, they sing
“she’s so perfect.“

be a sponge, and soak up their compliments,
until they mean nothing.
everyone loves you.

be a mirror, and show people the best of themselves
even if you're at your lowest.

because everyone loves looking at a pretty picture,
even if the lens is cracked.
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i don't think pretty girls get as much genuine sympathy when they complain about things.

now-- let's get this straight. i'm not 'one of those girls.' i'm not naturally pretty; i don't wake up in sweats and instagram myself and get tonnns of compliments. lol. but, you know the type of girls i mean. they are truly, purely pretty, without makeup or anything like that.

okay. so i don't really sympathize with them. that's because it's hard to feel bad for those pretty girls. you know why? they're pretty! so who cares? stuff's easier for them.

yes, it really is. but at the same time-- no, it isn't.

they may look perfect but no one's perfect! it's so easy to be fooled, and i think so many people just dismiss their problems because of the way they look. i tried to write something to maybe lessen these feelings within myself, and remind myself that pretty girls do have problems (although things are easier for them, generally. yes, it's a known fact.)

this being said, i still want to be one of them.
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Mood: Tender ~s-tanley Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This. Is. Brilliant. The imagery is gorgeous and the message is great. I often get the "at least you're skinny" like weight has anything to do with how I feel or the issue at hand. And it always kind of made me feel guilty like maybe I should just suck it up. So this just really spoke to me. Thank you!
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~infinitexxx Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:tighthug: i'm really glad it helped you! everyone always wants to dismiss problems when they're jealous of you, unfortunately.

its awful, but don't let it get you down! :iconcuddleplz:
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~s-tanley Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
<3
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~intricately-ordinary Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
the imagery in this is stunning much like the writer who crafted it :heart: i know what that's like. not the lack of sympathy... but the description of your poem, haha. i'm a lot like you, i think :huggle:
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~infinitexxx Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
how sweet :blush: thank you! hehe, glad you know what it's like. <3 or well, not glad, but you know what i mean! ^.^
:D i think so, too!
:iconkittyglompplz: we should talk more!
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~intricately-ordinary Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
absolutely! you're so lovely :la:
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~infinitexxx Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^.^ yay! you are, too <3
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well done!! =o <3
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~infinitexxx Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you! :heart:
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